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    A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

    Please help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics of this song



    ohhh, do you think it's true?
    Colors are not the same
    Something has really changed
    Now you can run again, shout at the wind, laught at the tree,
    show your smile, throw away the fear, rise up the head

    Ohhh, the worst is behind us,
    Show your pride again,
    hold on tight
    Now you can run again, shout at the wind, laught at the tree,
    show your smile, throw away the fear, rise up the head

    It's a season 2 -come on run through -itís your life, man!
    Don't be afraid of change -let bygones be bygones -itís time now , welldone guy

    ohhh, do you think it's true?
    People are not the same
    Something has really changed
    Now you can run again, shout at the wind, laught at the tree,
    show your smile, throw away the fear, rise up the head

    It's a season 2 -come on run through -itís your life, man!
    Don't be afraid of change -let bygones be bygones -itís time now

    {"Season 2" looks like a tv series season, something that changes}

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    #2

    Re: A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

    I don't have time to really look at it, but you certainly need to fix the spelling of "laugh", and "well done" should be two words. And "rise up the head" doesn't really work, even given the fact that song lyrics don't have to be grammatical.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

    Hi everyone,
    please, could someone confirm me that the lyric needs only the adjustments as wrote by emsr2d2?
    Something else?

    Thank you!

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    #4

    Re: A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

    "Laugh at the trees" unless there's some specific tree that you're talking about.
    "well done" is two words.

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    #5

    Re: A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

    Hi,
    one last help:
    ohhh,
    put your glass down,
    you are no longer thirsty
    Get up and be strong


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    #6

    Re: A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

    Yes, that's OK.

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