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    introduction to Seoguram

    This writing is a letter introducing a famous Korean Buddhist sculpture.
    Please correct mistakes if you have found them.

    Dear Charlie
    How's everything? I will tell you about a UNESCO site in Korea.
    It is Seokguram, located in Gyeongju, Gyeongsangbuk-do.
    If is a hermitage and part of Bulguksa temple complex built during the Unified Silla Period.
    It is famous for its elaborate architecture.
    We can go there together later. See you soon.

    ===========================

    Reference : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seokguram
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 22-Jun-2020 at 16:19. Reason: Put the explanation before the letter

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    Re: introduction to Seoguram

    Quote Originally Posted by keannu View Post
    This writing is a letter introducing to tell a friend about a famous Korean Buddhist sculpture.
    Please correct any mistakes if you have found find. them.



    Dear Charlie

    How's everything? I'd will like to tell you about a UNESCO site in Korea.

    It's called Seokguram, and it's located in Gyeongju, Gyeongsangbuk-do. If It's is a hermitage and part of the Bulguksa temple complex, built during the Unified Silla Period. It is It's famous for its elaborate architecture. Maybe we can go there together later sometime.

    See you soon.
    See above. We don't write each sentence on its own line when we write letters. This is clearly a letter to a friend (given that you're suggesting that you have a nice day out to a tourist attraction together) so you should use more contractions.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 22-Jun-2020 at 17:03. Reason: Fixed typo
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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