introduction to Seoguram

[keannu]

This writing is a letter introducing a famous Korean Buddhist sculpture.
Please correct mistakes if you have found them.

Dear Charlie
How's everything? I will tell you about a UNESCO site in Korea.
It is Seokguram, located in Gyeongju, Gyeongsangbuk-do.
If is a hermitage and part of Bulguksa temple complex built during the Unified Silla Period.
It is famous for its elaborate architecture.
We can go there together later. See you soon.

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Reference : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seokguram

 

[emsr2d2]

This [STRIKE]writing[/STRIKE] is a letter [STRIKE]introducing[/STRIKE] to tell a friend about a famous Korean Buddhist sculpture.
Please correct any mistakes [STRIKE]if[/STRIKE] you [STRIKE]have found[/STRIKE] find. [STRIKE]them.[/STRIKE]



Dear Charlie

How's everything? I'd [STRIKE]will[/STRIKE] like to tell you about a UNESCO site in Korea.

It's called Seokguram, and it's [STRIKE]located[/STRIKE] in Gyeongju, Gyeongsangbuk-do. [STRIKE]If[/STRIKE] It's [strike]is[/strike] a hermitage and part of the Bulguksa temple complex, built during the Unified Silla Period. [STRIKE]It is[/STRIKE] It's famous for its elaborate architecture. Maybe we can go there together [STRIKE]later[/STRIKE] sometime.

See you soon.

See above. We don't write each sentence on its own line when we write letters. This is clearly a letter to a friend (given that you're suggesting that you have a nice day out to a tourist attraction together) so you should use more contractions.