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Source : A 8[SUP]th[/SUP] grader’s composition to prepare for his middle school performance assessment.
Title : My Post-Corona Lifestyle
I wake up in the morning and eat between 8 and 9 and lunch between 1 and 2.
I have dinner between six and seven thirty. And I hardly exercise.
I stay at home or sometimes go out.
=>My daily routine goes like this. When I get up in the morning, I have breakfast between 8 am and 9 am. I have lunch between 1 pm and 2 pm and dinner between 6 pm and 7:30 pm. Actually, I hardly work out. I normally stay at home but sometimes go out.
When I get stressed, I play games, talk on the phone with my friends, or go outside to play with my friends. In the past, I used to go out a lot and play soccer a lot, but the Corona incident broke out,
so I went out less and naturally stayed home and didn't exercise much.
=> When I get stressed, I play games, talk on the phone with my friends, or go outside to play with my friends. In the past, I used to go out and play soccer a lot, but since COVID-19 broke out, I have gone out less and naturally stayed home, and haven’t worked out a lot as a result.
They go to school once a week and once every two weeks, but they cannot go to school if they cannot take physical education classes and have nothing to do in the hallway.
=> Middle school students go to school once a week and once every three weeks, but they can’t take physical education class and can’t leave the school building from the hallway if they have nothing to do outside.
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This is the writing practice of a student and my correction. If there are any mistakes, please correct them.
Title : My Post-Corona Lifestyle
I wake up in the morning and eat between 8 and 9 and lunch between 1 and 2.
I have dinner between six and seven thirty. And I hardly exercise.
I stay at home or sometimes go out.
=>My daily routine goes like this. When I get up in the morning, I have breakfast between 8 am and 9 am. I have lunch between 1 pm and 2 pm and dinner between 6 pm and 7:30 pm. Actually, I hardly work out. I normally stay at home but sometimes go out.
When I get stressed, I play games, talk on the phone with my friends, or go outside to play with my friends. In the past, I used to go out a lot and play soccer a lot, but the Corona incident broke out,
so I went out less and naturally stayed home and didn't exercise much.
=> When I get stressed, I play games, talk on the phone with my friends, or go outside to play with my friends. In the past, I used to go out and play soccer a lot, but since COVID-19 broke out, I have gone out less and naturally stayed home, and haven’t worked out a lot as a result.
They go to school once a week and once every two weeks, but they cannot go to school if they cannot take physical education classes and have nothing to do in the hallway.
=> Middle school students go to school once a week and once every three weeks, but they can’t take physical education class and can’t leave the school building from the hallway if they have nothing to do outside.
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This is the writing practice of a student and my correction. If there are any mistakes, please correct them.