Rachel Adams
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
Hello.
The first paragraph is not edited. My friend wrote it and we tried to edit it together. The sentences convey the same idea but they are not a direct translation anymore. Sometimes what a native speaker says is correct and understandable but this is not how a native speaker would express his ideas. Could you please check my corrections?
I wake up and go to wash. I most often (most of the time) eat meal and go to college. I finish my studies at 3. I am getting ready and going home. In the evening at 6 I start doing cleaning and homework. On Tuesdays, Thursdays and Fridays I have trainings. 8:00 I start getting ready for training. 9:00 I am getting ready and going home. I go to the shower.
I wake up and go to the bathroom. Most of the time I have a meal and then go to college. I fihish my classes at 3 :00. I get ready and go home. In the evening at 6, I start cleaning and doing my homework. I have trainings on Tuesdays, Thursdays and Fridays. At 8:00 I start getting ready for my training (session). 9:00 I get ready and go home. I go to the shower.
The first paragraph is not edited. My friend wrote it and we tried to edit it together. The sentences convey the same idea but they are not a direct translation anymore. Sometimes what a native speaker says is correct and understandable but this is not how a native speaker would express his ideas. Could you please check my corrections?
I wake up and go to wash. I most often (most of the time) eat meal and go to college. I finish my studies at 3. I am getting ready and going home. In the evening at 6 I start doing cleaning and homework. On Tuesdays, Thursdays and Fridays I have trainings. 8:00 I start getting ready for training. 9:00 I am getting ready and going home. I go to the shower.
I wake up and go to the bathroom. Most of the time I have a meal and then go to college. I fihish my classes at 3 :00. I get ready and go home. In the evening at 6, I start cleaning and doing my homework. I have trainings on Tuesdays, Thursdays and Fridays. At 8:00 I start getting ready for my training (session). 9:00 I get ready and go home. I go to the shower.