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    Lightbulb This afternoon, I ventured out into...

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    This afternoon, I ventured out into this inundated street to observe the current situation of flood. While turning my bicycle around, I tripped over the asphalted road and got wet. Anyway, I got emotional after seeing the desperate plight of the flood victims of our region. The water level is still creeping up. While the people in the lower-income brackets are still coming to terms with the fallout of the Covid-19, much to their regret, this flood has hit them even harder.

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    Re: This afternoon, I ventured out into...

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    This afternoon, I ventured out into this inundated street to observe the current situation of flood flooding situation. While turning my bicycle around, I tripped over the asphalted road and got wet. Anyway, I got emotional after seeing the desperate plight of the flood victims of our region. The water level is still creeping up. While the people in the lower-income brackets are still coming to terms with the fallout of the Covid-19, much to their regret, this flood has hit them even harder.
    Minor tweak.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 30-Jul-2020 at 20:29. Reason: Fixed typo

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    Re: This afternoon, I ventured out into...

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    the fallout of the Covid-19
    or
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    the fallout of the Covid-19 crisis
    Most diseases do not have "the" as part of their name.

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