This afternoon, I ventured out into...

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This afternoon, I ventured out into this inundated street to observe the current situation of flood. While turning my bicycle around, I tripped over the asphalted road and got wet. Anyway, I got emotional after seeing the desperate plight of the flood victims of our region. The water level is still creeping up. While the people in the lower-income brackets are still coming to terms with the fallout of the Covid-19, much to their regret, this flood has hit them even harder.
 

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This afternoon, I ventured out into this inundated street to observe the current [STRIKE]situation of flood[/STRIKE] flooding situation. While turning my bicycle around, I tripped over the asphalted road and got wet. Anyway, I got emotional after seeing the desperate plight of the flood victims of our region. The water level is still creeping up. While the people in the lower-income brackets are still coming to terms with the fallout of the Covid-19, much to their regret, this flood has hit them even harder.

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