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    Dialog with My Body

    Recently I've set a diet regimen for myself. That's whenever I don't feel hungry, I stop eating (for each meal).

    Yesterday after dinner I went out. I saw a street vendor was selling longans and a couple of customers were buying them.

    'Wow, I like logans. They taste sweet.' my tongue told me 'I haven't eaten them this year'.

    I heard they were talking about the price which was so cheap.

    'Do you want them?' I asked my stomach.

    'No, I'm not hungry now. You can't satisfy your tongue while torture me' the stomach protested.

    'Fine.' I smiled to my stomach and moved on.
    Please correct my writing if there's any grammatical solecism.

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    Re: Dialog with My Body

    Quote Originally Posted by tree123 View Post
    I recently I've set started a diet regimen for myself. That's which is that whenever I don't feel hungry, I stop eating (for at each meal).

    Yesterday after dinner, I went out. I saw a street vendor was selling longans and a couple of customers were buying them.

    'Wow, I like logans. They taste sweet.' My tongue told me 'I haven't eaten them this year'.

    I heard they were them talking about the price, which was so low. cheap.

    'Do you want them?' I asked my stomach.

    'No, I'm not hungry now. You can't satisfy your tongue while torturing me' the stomach protested.

    'Fine.' I smiled to my stomach and moved on.
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    #3

    Re: Dialog with My Body

    probus,
    May I know how my "answer was incorrect" to warrant deletion?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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