[General] I am afraid of death.

Status
Not open for further replies.

Silverobama

Key Member
Joined
Aug 8, 2010
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
China
Current Location
China
Hi.

I wrote a sentence when I was donating my blood. Please see the following.

I am scared of death but if I can save lives, I'd love to give my life.

I think it's weird but the meaning is quite clear. Would you please help me to make the italic sentence sound natural? The following is a picture of my donating blood.

360se_picture.jpg
 

tedmc

VIP Member
Joined
Apr 16, 2014
Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Malaysia
Current Location
Malaysia
What has donating blood got to do with dying? You are giving your blood, not your life. It is a noble cause which can save lives.

I'd love to donate blood to save lives
 

emsr2d2

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Jul 28, 2009
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
UK
Or, since you probably do it regularly, "I love to donate blood to save lives".
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top