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    Exclamation The south-western economies are getting

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    The south-western economies are getting changed over the proposed Padma Bridge. Many businessmen are buying lands around/near Padma Bridge project keeping promising future in mind. Some small and medium industries have already been established beside Padma project areas. Businessmen apprehend that if Padma Bridge is built and gas connectivity is ensured, burgeoning industries will emerge around Padma project areas. Since five years ago, businessmen hurriedly stumbles to set up industries in various areas of South-western part keeping Padma project in mind. It is expected that GDP can be increased by 1.2 percentage due to setting up of industries in south-western parts focusing feasibility of proposed Padma Bridge.

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    Re: The south-western economies are getting

    I don't know what you mean by "economies are getting changed". For the second sentence, try;

    Many businessmen are buying land near the Padma Bridge project, hoping to make a profit when the land goes up in value.
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    Padma Bridge

    I have an idea for a different title for this thread.
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    Padma Bridge

    Next try:

    Some small and medium-sized businesses have already been established in the area of the Padma Bridge project.
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    Re: The south-western economies are getting

    These words are not correctly used:

    -apprehend
    -burgeoning industries emerge
    -stumbles
    --feasibility
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    Re: The south-western economies are getting

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    These words are not correctly used:

    -apprehend
    -burgeoning industries emerge
    -stumbles
    --feasibility
    Which words I can use instead of these?

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    Padma Bridge

    Try:

    Businessmen are hopeful that the building of the Padma Bridge will lead to increased commerce in the area.
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    Padma Bridge

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    Which words I can use instead of these?
    Sometimes you replace something with nothing.
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    Padma Bridge

    Perhaps:

    Five years ago businesses were started in the area in anticipation of the building of the Padma Bridge. People are hoping for increased prosperity.

    You are biting off more than you can chew.

    You used "stumbles" incorrectly. Look it up.

    You can't use the last sentence (or the one before that).
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