Results 1 to 7 of 7
  1. Dukul12345's Avatar
    Member
    Student or Learner
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Bengali; Bangla
      • Home Country:
      • Bangladesh
      • Current Location:
      • Bangladesh

    • Join Date: Feb 2020
    • Posts: 130
    #1

    Lightbulb The great Liberation war

    Please correct any mistakes in this piece of writing.



    The great Liberation War is the derivation of our existence. The Liberation War is not just a word in our life. It is the name of an infinite flame in the heart of each and every Bengali. The Liberation War is the Bangalis' glory, pride, spirit and steel-like-firmness. It is Bengalis' inspiration and another name of being stimulated. The Liberation War is our past, present and future. We have to proceed accepting the Liberation War as our torchbearer. Everything including all our achievements, dreams, desires and plans should be based on the spirit of the Liberation War because only the Liberation War is the foundation of our national identity, and the support of our survival and going forward. The history of the Liberation War makes our new generation very joyous, provides them with motivation in the way of life and bestows nationality and self-identity upon them. They are fond of reading books about the Liberation War and it can be noticed that they have a deep/great desire for learning about the Liberation War. The Liberation War is the name of inexhaustible motivation and encouragement of this generation's patriotism. The nature of young generation is to go/run after new things. He wants to know about national identity; He wants to go to own roots. And along this way of life or in this journey of learning, he is motivated by own national history, tradition, common practice, cultural spirit and identity. He stands before 71; he comes to know that the country achieved independence after how much sacrifice, sufferings and bloodshed. Today's new generation has grown up with the steel-like-firmness, spirt, and patriotism of the Liberation War and the proof of which is found in Ekushey book fair and on Independence and Victory day. At every nook and cranny of the country, painting our national flag on their forehead, chest and back and having on national-flag-themed clothes, every youth is seen to be present at Shaheed Minar and National Memorial. It expresses their profound patriotism. The inspiration, spirit and patriotism of 71 are with us, will be with us and forever will be with us.

  2. teechar's Avatar
    Moderator
    English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • Iraq
      • Current Location:
      • Iraq

    • Join Date: Feb 2015
    • Posts: 10,684
    #2

    Re: The great Liberation war

    This is just repetitive rhetoric and praise. Is there a reason for that? What are you trying to achieve with that passage?

  3. VIP Member
    Retired English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • Europe
      • Current Location:
      • Czech Republic

    • Join Date: Jul 2015
    • Posts: 18,100
    #3

    Re: The great Liberation war

    I see that this has also been posted here: https://forum.thefreedictionary.com/...r.aspx#1170438
    Typoman - writer of rongs

  4. VIP Member
    Retired English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • Europe
      • Current Location:
      • Czech Republic

    • Join Date: Jul 2015
    • Posts: 18,100
    #4

    Re: The great Liberation war

    Typoman - writer of rongs

  5. Dukul12345's Avatar
    Member
    Student or Learner
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Bengali; Bangla
      • Home Country:
      • Bangladesh
      • Current Location:
      • Bangladesh

    • Join Date: Feb 2020
    • Posts: 130
    #5

    Re: The great Liberation war

    Quote Originally Posted by Piscean View Post
    I see that this has also been posted here: https://forum.thefreedictionary.com/...r.aspx#1170438
    Is it a crime to post same thing into different groups?

  6. Dukul12345's Avatar
    Member
    Student or Learner
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Bengali; Bangla
      • Home Country:
      • Bangladesh
      • Current Location:
      • Bangladesh

    • Join Date: Feb 2020
    • Posts: 130
    #6

    Re: The great Liberation war

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    This is just repetitive rhetoric and praise. Is there a reason for that? What are you trying to achieve with that passage?
    Nope, there is no specific reason. I have translated those sentences from Bengali and asked here to know whether those sentences are correct or not.

  7. VIP Member
    Retired English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • Europe
      • Current Location:
      • Czech Republic

    • Join Date: Jul 2015
    • Posts: 18,100
    #7

    Re: The great Liberation war

    Quote Originally Posted by Dukul12345 View Post
    Is it a crime to post same thing into different groups?
    We recommend posting a question on one forum only initially. If you do not get a satisfactory answer from that forum and you feel that you have exhausted its possibilities, then of course trying a different forum might help. It is only courteous however, to tell the second forum that you have already asked the question on another forum and then give a precis of the answers you received there, or provide a link to it, along with an explanation of why you are now looking elsewhere.
    (emsr2d2)
    Typoman - writer of rongs

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •