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  1. Dukul12345's Avatar
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    Exclamation An Indian girl is now...

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    An Indian girl is now in jail for illegally entering Bangladesh after crossing the border out of love. On Thursday afternoon, Doarbazar police sent him to court and the court ordered him to be sent to jail. The arrested Manjura Begum is the daughter of Mugur Ali of Tapar village under Changsari police station in Kamrup district of Assam state, India.

    Police and court sources said the girl entered Bangladesh through the Banglabazar area on the Doarabazar border on Tuesday. Abdus Sattar, son of Abul Kashem of Uttar Kalaura village in Banglabazar union of Doarabazar upazila of the district, fled to Assam, India five years ago after being convicted in a case. There he met Manjura Begum. A loving relationship developed between them. A year later, Sattar moved to Bangladesh. After returning to the country, he moved to Bahrain again. For a long time, their love affair continued through mobile. On Tuesday, the young woman came to the door and went straight to her boyfriend's house. Her relatives married her to Abdus Sattar in Bahrain via mobile phone.

    Meanwhile, the local BGB went and arrested the Indian girl after getting the news of her entry into Bangladesh. He was later handed over to the police. Police in Bangladesh handed over the girl to the court on Thursday afternoon and the court ordered her to be sent to jail in the afternoon.

    Doarabazar police OC said. Nazir Alam said Manjura Begum from Assam has been handed over to the court. He has been charged with illegal entry.

    Sunamganj court inspector Selim Newaz said the Doarbazar court had ordered Manjura Begum to be sent to jail.

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    Re: An Indian girl is now...

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    An Indian girl is now in jail for illegally entering Bangladesh after crossing the border out of love. On Thursday afternoon, Doarbazar police sent her to court and the court ordered her to be sent to jail. The arrested Manjura Begum is the daughter of Mugur Ali of Tapar village under Changsari police station in Kamrup district of Assam state, India.
    What is meant by "under Changsari police station"?
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    Re: An Indian girl is now...

    It says he was charged- shouldn't that be she?

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    Re: An Indian girl is now...

    A person is convicted in a case of something, not just a case.
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