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    Thumbs down Can any native in English correct it please?

    Hi,

    It's for someone who want to make an advertisement about an investment project:

    Our mission consists in planning new ideas, creating new ways, opening new roads, designing the future and making your dreams become true.

    Thank you in advance

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    Re: Can any native in English correct it please?

    It's generally as good as what I see from native English speakers, but I'd make these changes:

    "...consists of planning..."

    "...your dreams come true..."

    There are no grammatical errors in your statement, just those two non-idiomatic usages.

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    Re: Can any native in English correct it please?

    Thank you

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