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    And Finally: Could you correct it, please?

    Hi,

    This should be the last correction for today:

    "A MNelson Consultores e Investidores Associados, intends to understand its clientís wishes with a macro view, and so to offer solutions that could its position, line up its public to the market and increase itís profits."

    Thank you

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    Re: And Finally: Could you correct it, please?

    Associados,- no comma
    intends - aims
    could its position- verb missing
    line up its public- not sure what you mean by line up
    itís- its

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