I think your correction is fine.

English Teacher
One of my students wrote about her favorite place:
I like going to Kashiya Yokocho. It is in Kawagoe. We can eat delicious food there. It is fun for me to go there and eat around. [...]
I think the last sentence should be corrected.
Would it be OK if I corrected it to "It is fun for me to go and eat around there"?
"It's fun for me to eat around there" might be the best, I suppose.
I think your correction is fine.
No, neither "eat around" nor "eat around there" is natural. Consider using "try out" or "sample" with "different dishes" or "various foods" in that sentence.
What does your student mean by 'eat around'? Does he/she mean 'eat in various places in the area'?
How about: It is fun for me to go on a food/gastronomic tour?
A food tour is one where the primary objective is eating local foods.
Last edited by tedmc; 24-Oct-2020 at 13:52.
I am not a teacher or a native speaker.
In that case, your corrections are fine.