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    A short metaphor

    I was walking along the railway platform and I pictured how I ballooned myself up and flew right up to the skies. In a cool way, just like Mary Poppins would do. And then I just exploded into thousands of little pieces, so everyone would get a bit of me. Just one little piece.

    This of course is not possible; there is no way one can make oneself into a balloon or blow up, or anything like that. But it's not bad, it's not at all bad to look at the skies that are not much of a blue. It's OK not to have a sandwich with strawberry jam by the hand. For it makes us strive to find something else, something brighter. It makes us dream.

    And when you dream, you create — be it music, writing, singing, or whatnot — and you do share a bit of yourself.

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    Re: A short metaphor

    Welcome to the forum.
    Quote Originally Posted by Nick D. Lukashevich View Post
    I was walking along the a railway platform, and I pictured how I ballooned myself up all inflated like a balloon and flew flying right up to the skies, in a cool way, just like Mary Poppins would do. And then I just exploded into thousands of little pieces, so everyone would get a bit of me, just one little piece.

    This of course is not possible; there is no way one can make turn oneself into a balloon or blow up, or anything like that. But it's not bad. It's not at all bad to look at the skies that are not much of a blue. It's OK not to have a sandwich with strawberry jam by in the hand, for it makes us strive to find something else, something brighter. It makes us dream.

    And when you dream, you create — be it music, writing, singing, or whatnot — and you do share a bit of yourself.

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    Re: A short metaphor

    Welcome, Nick!

    Do you have a question? Does it have something to do with literature?
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: A short metaphor

    Moved to Editing & Writing Topics.

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    Re: A short metaphor

    Nick D. Lukashevich, that's pretty good for somebody whose first language is Russian. There is one thing that puzzles me, thus:

    It's OK not to have a sandwich with strawberry jam in your hand. (Edited.)

    I can't figure that out.
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    Re: A short metaphor

    To hand?

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    Re: A short metaphor

    I'd say, "in hand," "in your hand," or "in my hand" — not "in the hand."
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    Re: A short metaphor

    But what does it mean?

    (Maybe the OP will tell us.)
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    Re: A short metaphor

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Nick D. Lukashevich, that's pretty good for somebody whose first language is Russian. There is one thing that puzzles me, thus:

    It's OK not to have a sandwich with strawberry jam in your hand. (Edited.)

    I can't figure that out.
    Having a strawberry jam sandwich in your hand might be a Russian expression for everything being rosy.

    But it looks like Nick has left the building.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: A short metaphor

    The OP's last activity on this site was one minute after posting this thread, nearly three weeks ago.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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