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    the online graduate admission

    I am trying to tell my professor that I have entered his information to the grad school I am applying to, I am not too sure if "the online graduate admission" is a correct phrases to use?


    "I have submitted your contact information to the online graduate admission, and SF State should have emailed you already."

    Does the sentence above make sense?

    Is there a better way to write it out?

    Thanks in advance?

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    Re: the online graduate admission

    You need something after "graduate admission". Did you pass the contact details on via the graduate admission website? Did you pass them on to the graduate admission board/team?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: the online graduate admission

    Yes, via the graduate admission website.

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    Re: the online graduate admission

    Quote Originally Posted by theol View Post
    I am trying to tell my professor that I have entered given his information contact details to the grad school I am applying to. I am not too sure if "the online graduate admission" is a the correct phrases phrase.to use?


    "I have submitted passed on/given your contact information details to SF State to via their online graduate admission website, and SF State they should have emailed you already."

    Does the sentence above make sense?

    Is there a better way to write it? out?

    Thanks in advance.
    See above for my corrections and how I would word it. "Contact details" is much more common than "contact information" in BrE.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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