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    An e-mail

    Hi Mohamed,

    I am always hearing about you good. People are considering you as a role model of a best marketer. This what my passion about working with you so that I can learn.

    I am following your successes from a step to another, for a while. I hope that I can reach 50% of what you have already reached in your career path.

    I am worried that you might get annoyed of me keeping sending you. I am sorry for that but this is due my ambitions

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    Re: An e-mail

    Try:

    I have been hearing good things about you.

    And:

    I have been watching you from afar. I admire you for what you have done with your career.
    Not a professional teacher

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    Re: An e-mail

    Quote Originally Posted by Economist2010 View Post
    Hi Mohamed,

    I am always hearing about you good.
    I always hear good things about you.

    People are considering you as a role model of a best marketer.
    Many people consider you a role model as a ????? (What's a "marketer"?)

    This what my passion about working with you so that I can learn.
    I'm passionate about working with you because I can learn a lot.

    I am following your successes from a step to another, for a while.
    I have been following your successful career for a while.

    I hope that I can reach 50% of what you have already reached in your career path.
    I hope to achieve even half of what you already have.

    I am worried that you might get annoyed of me keeping sending you. I am sorry for that but this is due my ambitions.
    I hope you don't mind my contacting you but I'm very ambitious.
    Please see my corrected/improved version of each sentence above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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