3- Is my pronunciation or reading good?

[mohammedabo]

Do you have any comment on my reading ?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ipGAb2EEFws

[Tdol]

You need to work on your vowel sounds. Aldo, you use /p/ instead of /b/ at the start of the first time you said babies, but then said it right.

[teechar]

Also, you need to work on your pronunciation of the ð sound (as in "this").
I strongly advise you to use forvo.com or a good dictionary website to learn the native pronunciation of English words. For example, you mispronounce "column" as "ko-lem", and "left" as "lift".

[mohammedabo]

Yes, you are right.I noticed that myself.Next video, I will control my mouth better than this one.

[teechar]

Yes, you are right. I noticed that myself. Next video, I will control pay better/more attention to my mouth better pronunciation than I did in this one.

OK, but as I said before, the only way to improve is to practise. Use those sites I suggested above.