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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Need assistance to improve wording

    Hello,

    I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Can you please see if the language is good or maybe there are better wording.
    Thank you!

    Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor- I built a Training program for 'F.O.A.' volunteers, teaching techniques and methods for internet search and content monitoring on the web and social media

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    #2

    Re: Need assistance to improve wording

    Quote Originally Posted by Moreno132 View Post
    Hello,

    I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Could you please see if the language is good or maybe there are is better wording a better way to write it?
    Thank you!

    Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor (Instructions?)
    I built have planned a training program for 'F.O.A.' volunteers. It covers teaching techniques and methods for internet search and content monitoring on the web and social media.
    .
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #3

    Re: Need assistance to improve wording

    Quote Originally Posted by Moreno132 View Post
    Hello,

    I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Can you please see if the language is good or maybe there are is better wording?
    Thank you!

    Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor - I built a training program for F.O.A. volunteers, that teaches ing techniques and methods for searching the internet search and content monitoring on the Web and social media.
    .

  4. Senior Member
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    #4

    Re: Need assistance to improve wording

    Quote Originally Posted by Moreno132 View Post
    Hello,

    I would like to add this sentence to my CV. Can you please see if the language is good or maybe there are better wording.
    Thank you!

    Search Techniques and Content Monitoring Instructor- I built Developed a Training program for 'F.O.A.' volunteers; teaching Taught techniques and methods for internet search and content monitoring on the web and social media
    Y

  5. teechar's Avatar
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    #5

    Re: Need assistance to improve wording

    Quote Originally Posted by Yankee View Post
    there are better wording
    I'm surprised you, as a teacher, find that acceptable.

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