Dextermg
New member
- Joined
- Nov 20, 2020
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello there, I learned english not in a right way, and because of that I can't speak and write smoothly. Now, I am in charge of sale marketing.
Any help here with this paragraph!?
Is it correct at all:
" You wanna know a secret?Here is our curvey pure
products which are being sold as two kinds of
supplement and lotion in market. They are free from
hormone, 100% Natural, free from animal cruelty and the
best part is, our product carries a 60-day money back
guarantee. "
Any help here with this paragraph!?
Is it correct at all:
" You wanna know a secret?Here is our curvey pure
products which are being sold as two kinds of
supplement and lotion in market. They are free from
hormone, 100% Natural, free from animal cruelty and the
best part is, our product carries a 60-day money back
guarantee. "
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