Business

[Maybo]

I have chosen a couple of IELTS practice speaking topics and written a paragraph about each one. Please check them and correct any mistakes.

1. How can a small business grow big?

Owners should be open minded and keep learning new information. They can join workshops to learn how large enterprises develop. Since small business may have limit on budgets for marketing or advertising, the owners can try to build a friendly relationship with costumers so that their customers can help them promote. Also, they can use Facebook page or Youtube to promote their businesses.

2. What kind of small businesses will young people have in the future?

Online tutoring classes will become popular. The new form of classes saves commuting time and avoids being affected by weather. It's convenient for young people to start this business because they can just do it with a computer and the internet. Another small business is video editors. With more and more advertising prevails online, it requires high quality of visual and sound effects to compete with others and this job will be highly in demand in the future.

 

[Tarheel]

I have chosen a couple of IELTS practice speaking topics and written a paragraph about each one. Please check them and correct any mistakes.

1. How can a small business grow big?

Owners should be open minded and keep learning new information. They can join workshops to learn how large enterprises develop. Since small business may have limit on budgets for marketing or advertising, the owners can try to build a friendly relationship with costumers so that their customers can help them promote. Also, they can use their Facebook page or Youtube to promote their businesses.

I would say:

How can a small business grow?

And:

Business owners should be open to learning new things.

And:

Since small businesses may have limited budgets for marketing and advertising they might have to depend on word of mouth to expand their customer base.

 

[Tarheel]

2. What kinds of small businesses will young people have in the future?

Online tutoring classes will become popular. The new form of classes saves commuting time and is not affected by the weather. It's convenient for young people to start this business because they can just do it with a computer and the internet. Another small business is video editing. With more and more advertising [STRIKE]prevails[/STRIKE] online, it requires a high quality of visual and sound effects to compete with in that market, and the job will be highly in demand in the future.

Or:

in high demand

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