rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi, there. For me, imagination in writing is just like the filter in a fish tank and words and paintings are always a perfect combination to provide a snapshot of our minds and thoughts. Would you please proofread the sentences below and share what you imagine when you look at the painting. Any help would be appreciated. Here are the words and the painting.
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You promised you'd come this year’s "Turkey Day", and I waited all these nights only to be greeted by the moon of a tear-filled dawn.
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You promised you'd come this year’s "Turkey Day", and I waited all these nights only to be greeted by the moon of a tear-filled dawn.