"Enhance your looks"

[Rachel Adams]

Does "enhance your looks" sound natural?

For context: "Changes are important for us. We need them. My friend is going to have a plastic surgery to enhance her looks. She wants to be as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside."

 

[Rachel Adams]

Are those your sentences?

Yes, I wrote them to add more context. Why?

 

[Rover_KE]

You've been a member long enough to know that we always need the source of quoted text.

When you post your own text for editing, it should be in the Editing & Writing Topics forum as I've told you before.

 

[Rachel Adams]

You've been a member long enough to know that we always need the source of quoted text.

I didn't provide context because I wrote it and added more information in the first post.

 

[Rachel Adams]

You've been a member long enough to know that we always need the source of quoted text.

When you post your own text for editing, it should be in the Editing & Writing Topics forum as I've told you before.

The whole text doesn't need to be edited. I added it fore more information. I was wondering if "enhance your looks" sounds natural. It is not part of an essay.

 

[Rachel Adams]

... and you didn't tell us that in the first post.

Do you think that sometime in the next thousand or so threads you'll doubtless start you might actually do what we ask?


Silly question. I know the answer.

My post says "For context". I wasn't asking to edit the following part.

 

[tedmc]

The text looks fine to me. You could also say "enhance her appearance".

 

[emsr2d2]

My post says "For context". I wasn't asking you to edit the following part.

Note my correction above.

None of this changes the fact that you did not tell us in post #1 that you wrote the main sentence yourself. Please heed our advice and do what we ask every time.