Yueehs
Junior Member
- Joined
- May 2, 2020
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Malay
- Home Country
- Malaysia
- Current Location
- Singapore
Hi,
Can help me edit this memo?
I will send them via email.
1) To avoid the invasion of ants and the growth of bacteria, and to reduce your troubles, do not throw food or drink container into the dustbin at your seat, instead throw them into the big dustbin in the pantry.
2) To avoid the invasion of ants and the growth of bacteria, please throw all waste container into the big dustbin at the pantry.
Is the 2nd sentence sound better?
Regards,
HS
Can help me edit this memo?
I will send them via email.
1) To avoid the invasion of ants and the growth of bacteria, and to reduce your troubles, do not throw food or drink container into the dustbin at your seat, instead throw them into the big dustbin in the pantry.
2) To avoid the invasion of ants and the growth of bacteria, please throw all waste container into the big dustbin at the pantry.
Is the 2nd sentence sound better?
Regards,
HS