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Writing profile summary

Can someone please help to edit my profile summary?

Experienced and result-oriented office administrator with high organization skill seek position in Human Resource position. Proven abilities to handle complex tasks; viewed as a resourceful person. Able to work well with various people in different department.

Last edited by Yueehs; 01-Dec-2020 at 00:51. Reason: remove some words and increase the size

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Re: Writing profile summary

Before we continue, please use the Edit Post facility to enlarge the font in your post. It's almost impossible to read. While you're editing it, please remove the following:

1. Hi
2. Thanks.
3. Regards
4. HS
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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Re: Writing profile summary

I have change the size and remove the unnecessary words.

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Re: Writing profile summary

Quote Originally Posted by Yueehs View Post
Can someone please help to edit my profile summary?


  • Experienced and results-oriented office administrator with high excellent organizational skills, seeking a position in Human Resources. position.
  • Proven abilities to handle complex tasks; viewed as a resourceful person.
  • Able to work well with various people in different diverse departments.


See above. Don't put the sentences one after another like a paragraph. They should be laid out as bullet points. That's the only way that the reduced sentence construction can work.

Quote Originally Posted by Yueehs View Post
I have changed the size and removed the unnecessary words.
Thank you. Please use the shorter format in future posts.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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