Please listen to the recording below and tell me what you think of my pronunciation .
It is my first trial to speak in a free way.I know my Egyptian Accent is so clear, but next time I will do my best to improve it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kao_I77pZjo
I'd like to advise you to be more careful with the pronunciation of "b", "p" and "th".
As pointed out above, there are several areas that need a lot of work on your part. I strongly advise you to focus on one or two at a time, no more.
For example, take a look at the following video to learn the correct pronunciation of θ and ð
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h5LO0hHGfQg
The only thing I'll add to that guy's instruction, is that when you're practising ð, imagine your larynx as a car engine that is switched on! With θ, the engine is off; you just blow air through your teeth.
After some practice, post a recording of you reading exercise #3 in the following link.
https://engoo.com/app/lessons/conson...EeeSXmdrIWqFFA
Thank you all. Here is my second trial for the same part.
https://vocaroo.com/1w66hVWqB3Q7
I'm sorry to say this, but you're wasting your time. You need to get the basics of pronunciation right first.
Why don't you try doing what I suggested in post #4?
Without having the basics of pronunciation right yourself, you are doing your children a disservice by trying to teach them. Why don't you find some websites that are specifically geared towards helping children with English, run by native speakers?
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.