Motivation Letter for Master's degree (scholarship)

[kennai]

Try:

My passion for data science started when I took a short course at a computer institute in Thailand. I learned that data science is a powerful tool that can help businesses analyze. the mass of data that they deal with and to make decisions.

I don't know why you can't mention the name of the country. As for the school, don't they want people to know about them?

It's a draft letter.

[Tarheel]

Say:

Because I had no background in the data area, I gained more experience with that with my previous companies and joined online classes from various websites.

[Tarheel]

If machine learning isn't capitalized there's no reason advanced machine learning would be.