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    kennai is offline Newbie
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    Re: Motivation Letter for Master's degree (scholarship)

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
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    My passion for data science started when I took a short course at a computer institute in Thailand. I learned that data science is a powerful tool that can help businesses analyze. the mass of data that they deal with and to make decisions.

    I don't know why you can't mention the name of the country. As for the school, don't they want people to know about them?
    It's a draft letter.

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    Re: Motivation Letter for Master's degree (scholarship)

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    Because I had no background in the data area, I gained more experience with that with my previous companies and joined online classes from various websites.
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    Re: Motivation Letter for Master's degree (scholarship)

    If machine learning isn't capitalized there's no reason advanced machine learning would be.
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