[General] ...cross over the mountains...

[rodgers white]

For me, poetry is an art form that allows the artist to combine both poetry and a visual work of art within a single art piece. Words and paintings are a perfect combination to provide a snapshot into our minds and thoughts. Would you please proofread my sentences and share what you imagine when you look at the painting? Any help would be appreciated. Here are the words and the painting.

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On the day you cross over the mountains, remember me. I ask you...The one who stayed behind.


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I want to insert something but I don't know what. Would you please suggest something to fill in the gap or go in the space, please?

On the day you cross over the mountains, remember me. I ask you ______________ The one who stayed behind.

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

I ask you to keep in mind the one who stayed behind.

 

[Tdol]

to think of/to spare a thought for