alpacinou
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I'm trying to draw a contrast between a fire and inside a person who is cold.
Is this good?
She looked at him putting steak on the barbecue. The read meat was sizzling, its aroma filling the entire yard. She couldn't help think about the contrast between the raging fire of the barbecue and his icy cold heart.
I need to say it in a more subtle way, not directly mentioning the word "contrast." Do you have suggestions?
Is this good?
She looked at him putting steak on the barbecue. The read meat was sizzling, its aroma filling the entire yard. She couldn't help think about the contrast between the raging fire of the barbecue and his icy cold heart.
I need to say it in a more subtle way, not directly mentioning the word "contrast." Do you have suggestions?