Re: My mind went through and settled on

Originally Posted by
alpacinoutd
On the plane, I looked out the window.
I looked out of the plane window.
The sun was gleaming in the empty blue sky.
The sun gleamed in a cloudless sky.
My mind went through yesterday's events and finally settled on my wife. Was she mad at me?
I went over the events of yesterday in my mind and wondered if, and why, my wife was mad at me.
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