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- Jan 17, 2016
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- English Teacher
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- Chinese
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- China
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- China
Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Gan said, “As for what all this means, it means Rui and Meili succeeded beyond anything I imagined, and it gladdens my heart.” Gan got up and sat beside his daughter, putting his arm around her he kissed her forehead. “Thank you.”
Jingying took over the storytelling, something that now seemed a little more mundane than that of Lanhua’s dream. Her stories took them late into the night before she stopped. “Yang, it’s late, you had better take Qingmei home before her parents think we’ve abducted her.”
They all stood and said their goodbyes, Lanhua whispered something into Yang’s ear, Yang turned red but smiled and taking Qingmei’s hand walked her towards the door. Qingmei turned and said,” Thank you. Thank you all so much for making me feel welcome, and the amazing stories.”
Walking her home, Yang said, “Sorry, I hope my sister didn’t freak you out too much. Her dreams are not usually that weird. Once you get to know her you’ll see, she’s just like anyone else.”
Qingmei squeezed his hand. “I think your sister is the bravest girl I’ve ever met, having those dreams would scare me to the bone.”
Yang said, “Me too.She’s had them since she was not much taller than my knee, maybe longer.”
Qingmei said, “Are you going to tell me what she whispered to you or, is it a brother-sister secret?”
Yang said, “She told me her first dream of you was about tonight, our walk over to my house and our kiss.”
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Gan said, “As for what all this means, it means Rui and Meili succeeded beyond anything I imagined, and it gladdens my heart.” Gan got up and sat beside his daughter, putting his arm around her he kissed her forehead. “Thank you.”
Jingying took over the storytelling, something that now seemed a little more mundane than that of Lanhua’s dream. Her stories took them late into the night before she stopped. “Yang, it’s late, you had better take Qingmei home before her parents think we’ve abducted her.”
They all stood and said their goodbyes, Lanhua whispered something into Yang’s ear, Yang turned red but smiled and taking Qingmei’s hand walked her towards the door. Qingmei turned and said,” Thank you. Thank you all so much for making me feel welcome, and the amazing stories.”
Walking her home, Yang said, “Sorry, I hope my sister didn’t freak you out too much. Her dreams are not usually that weird. Once you get to know her you’ll see, she’s just like anyone else.”
Qingmei squeezed his hand. “I think your sister is the bravest girl I’ve ever met, having those dreams would scare me to the bone.”
Yang said, “Me too.She’s had them since she was not much taller than my knee, maybe longer.”
Qingmei said, “Are you going to tell me what she whispered to you or, is it a brother-sister secret?”
Yang said, “She told me her first dream of you was about tonight, our walk over to my house and our kiss.”
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