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    Post Vacancy for consultant

    1-Further to our earlier communication and with the beginning of the new year, is there a need for a consultant role so that I can apply.

    2- with the beginning of a new year, is there a budget for a consultant so that I can be considered for that role

    3- do you have a vacancy for a consultant this year.

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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    You're really not going to get many responses until you stop making completely basic errors such as failing to end a question with a question mark.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    You're really not going to get many responses until you stop making completely basic errors such as failing to end a question with a question mark.
    Will make sure of that errors

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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    Quote Originally Posted by Economist2010 View Post
    Will make sure of that errors
    Perhaps:

    I will work on that. I will do better in the future.

    (The original sentence does not make sense. )
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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    Perhaps:

    I would be interested in a consultancy position whenever you have a vacancy.
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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    Quote Originally Posted by Economist2010 View Post
    Will make sure of that errors
    How many errors can you count in this promise not to make errors?

    (One is at the beginning. One is at the end. There are more between them.)
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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    Quote Originally Posted by Economist2010 View Post
    1-Following up on our earlier communication and with the beginning of the new year, is there a need for a consultant position this year that I can apply for?

    2- Is there a consultant position in your 2021 budget that I can apply for?

    Are you sure their fiscal year starts January 1? Many start on April 1, July 1, or September 1.


    3- Do you have an opening for a consultant this year?
    Use #3. Business letters should never waste the reader's time.
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    Re: Vacancy for consultant

    You might have noticed that I made my own suggestion rather than make a bunch of corrections. (Compared to Charlie I'm lazy. )

    I doubt that they want to discuss their budget with somebody they haven't even hired yet. (Of course, I could be wrong about that. I am often wrong.)
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