[General] Vacancy for consultant

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1-Further to our earlier communication and with the beginning of the new year, is there a need for a consultant role so that I can apply.

2- with the beginning of a new year, is there a budget for a consultant so that I can be considered for that role

3- do you have a vacancy for a consultant this year.
 

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You're really not going to get many responses until you stop making completely basic errors such as failing to end a question with a question mark.
 

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You're really not going to get many responses until you stop making completely basic errors such as failing to end a question with a question mark.

Will make sure of that errors
 

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Will make sure of that errors

Perhaps:

I will work on that. I will do better in the future.

(The original sentence does not make sense. :-| )
 

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Perhaps:

I would be interested in a consultancy position whenever you have a vacancy.
 

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Will make sure of that errors
How many errors can you count in this promise not to make errors?

(One is at the beginning. One is at the end. There are more between them.)
 

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1-Following up on our earlier communication [STRIKE]and with the beginning of the new year[/STRIKE], is there [STRIKE]a need for[/STRIKE] a consultant position this year that I can apply for?

2- Is there a consultant position in your 2021 budget that I can apply for?

Are you sure their fiscal year starts January 1? Many start on April 1, July 1, or September 1.


3- Do you have an opening for a consultant this year?
Use #3. Business letters should never waste the reader's time.
 

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You might have noticed that I made my own suggestion rather than make a bunch of corrections. (Compared to Charlie I'm lazy. ;-) )

I doubt that they want to discuss their budget with somebody they haven't even hired yet. (Of course, I could be wrong about that. I am often wrong.)
 
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