this city is something

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alpacinou

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Is this good?

This city. It's not the cleanest in the world. It's not the brightest and certainly not the most beautiful. But it's something.
 

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I think it is better to put the four sentences into one. In fact the first is not a sentence.

This city is not the cleanest in the world, not the brightest nor the most beautiful, but it's something.
 

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Perhaps:

This city is not the cleanest, not the brightest, and not the most beautiful, but there is something special about it.
 

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Or but it is really something.
 
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