rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
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- China
Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Lanhua went to bed, and her parents cleaned up the dinner dishes etc. Just before climbing into bed, Gan wrote a short message on the last page of his journal. “Dear brother, Rui, I am overwhelmed with happiness that you and Meili (Or should I say YiYang and Debra) find your freedom beyond the computer, and even the machines my father built for you. You and my niece are beautiful, give her my love. I am also glad that you found such good friends, Kai, David, Jingying and Professor, from beyond the city. Oh, surprise, surprise, my daughter dreams the future. Your loving Brother, Gan.”
Jingying giggled and said，“That will freak him out a bit when he first reads it, but I can imagine how glad it will make him feel.”
Jingying went to have her shower, and Gan reminisced for a few moments, then, he glued two small envelopes onto the last page, glued it to the second-last page, and closed the book.
About a hundred metres from Qingmei’s home, Qingmei said, “Do you think your sister is asleep, dreaming of us?”
Yang smirked mischievously, “I don’t know, I’m not going to let it worry me. Besides, she will keep our secrets.”
Qingmei stopped, closed her eyes, and angled her face upward. Yang stared at her upturned face for a few moments, thinking how beautiful it was under the moonlight, and then he kissed her.
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Lanhua went to bed, and her parents cleaned up the dinner dishes etc. Just before climbing into bed, Gan wrote a short message on the last page of his journal. “Dear brother, Rui, I am overwhelmed with happiness that you and Meili (Or should I say YiYang and Debra) find your freedom beyond the computer, and even the machines my father built for you. You and my niece are beautiful, give her my love. I am also glad that you found such good friends, Kai, David, Jingying and Professor, from beyond the city. Oh, surprise, surprise, my daughter dreams the future. Your loving Brother, Gan.”
Jingying giggled and said，“That will freak him out a bit when he first reads it, but I can imagine how glad it will make him feel.”
Jingying went to have her shower, and Gan reminisced for a few moments, then, he glued two small envelopes onto the last page, glued it to the second-last page, and closed the book.
About a hundred metres from Qingmei’s home, Qingmei said, “Do you think your sister is asleep, dreaming of us?”
Yang smirked mischievously, “I don’t know, I’m not going to let it worry me. Besides, she will keep our secrets.”
Qingmei stopped, closed her eyes, and angled her face upward. Yang stared at her upturned face for a few moments, thinking how beautiful it was under the moonlight, and then he kissed her.
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