alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
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- Iran
Is this good?
He was shot. He knew he wasn't going to make it. His body stopped moving but he kept his eyes open, trying to look at the world as much as he could. Then blackness overtook him.
I'm looking for something better to replace the underlined part with. Something like grab, seize, savor or something like that.
He was shot. He knew he wasn't going to make it. His body stopped moving but he kept his eyes open, trying to look at the world as much as he could. Then blackness overtook him.
I'm looking for something better to replace the underlined part with. Something like grab, seize, savor or something like that.