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    alpacinoutd is offline Key Member
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    The lamp gave off a sickly glow.

    Is this okay?

    The lamp gave off a sickly glow. Their bedroom reeked of her infidelity. Their bed stank of her unfaithfulness. John could almost hear her moaning as she offered her body to strangers. He could hear her say "I'm your slut," as she cheated on him. He could no longer stay there.

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    Tarheel is offline VIP Member
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    Re: The lamp gave off a sickly glow.

    It's imaginative. Yes.
    Not a professional teacher

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