Sara's mother died of cancer

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Sara's mother died of cancer. She would see her in her dreams, a big orange tumor creeping up and down her body as if it had tentacles. Sara would reach out to hold her hand, but her skeletal body would crumble and vanish. She would wake up in the darkness of her room, wondering when she can get a few hours of uninterrupted sleep.
 

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Sara's mother died of cancer. She would see her in her dreams, a big orange tumor creeping up and down her body as if it had tentacles. Sara would reach out to hold her hand, but her skeletal body would crumble and vanish. She would wake up in the darkness of her room, wondering when she could/might/would get a few hours of uninterrupted sleep.
It's good.
 
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