Is this okay?
"Either you let me sleep with Patrick without making a fuss or I'm filing for divorce," said Nicole in an admonishing tone.
"Heads, you win, tails, I lose," answered Jame [her husband].
Is this okay?
"Either you let me sleep with Patrick without making a fuss or I'm filing for divorce," said Nicole in an admonishing tone.
"Heads, you win, tails, I lose," answered Jame [her husband].
It seems like a strange deal. If James' wife wants to sleep with another man, divorce seems like a great result!
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