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31-Jan-2021, 21:28 #1
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You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now
1. "You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now," she said, sighing faintly.
"Can't commit. I have heard this song before, alright."
2. "You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now," she said, sighing faintly.
"Can't commit. Where have I heard this song before?"
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31-Jan-2021, 21:40 #2
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Re: You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now
Number 2 is better.
I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.
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