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    alpacinoutd is offline Key Member
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    You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now

    1. "You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now," she said, sighing faintly.
    "Can't commit. I have heard this song before, alright."

    2. "You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now," she said, sighing faintly.
    "Can't commit. Where have I heard this song before?"

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    Re: You know I love you Bob. I just can't commit right now

    Number 2 is better.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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