alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Persian
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- Iran
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- Iran
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The little girl had suffered enough already. Leukemia had reached her bones, tearing them apart. She didn't deserve this much pain. No one did. Her death, when it came, was merciless and merciful all at the same time.
The little girl had suffered enough already. Leukemia had reached her bones, tearing them apart. She didn't deserve this much pain. No one did. Her death, when it came, was merciless and merciful all at the same time.