She's got a temper like an Atlantic squall.

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alpacinou

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Are these okay?

1. She's got a temper like an Atlantic squall.

2. The first movement of the Concerto is much like an Atlantic squall. It's imperious, quick to sweep the audience, and then it subsides to leave the listener in awe and confusion.

3. Their love was like an Atlantic storm. It passed as quickly as it had come.
 
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Numbers 1 and 2 are fine.

Sometimes Atlantic storms last a long time. You should see our hurricanes!
 

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#3 doesn't hit the spot for me.
 
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