alpacinou
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I'm trying to express the idea that someone became really jealous after seeing a photo.
Does this work? Are there better ways?
John was browsing Facebook when he came across a photo of Patrick's take recently. It showed him on the Malibu beach with Julia, a girl John chased in college but could never get. His stomach clenched with jealousy. In another life, a nicer/luckier one, Julia could have been his wife.
Does this work? Are there better ways?
John was browsing Facebook when he came across a photo of Patrick's take recently. It showed him on the Malibu beach with Julia, a girl John chased in college but could never get. His stomach clenched with jealousy. In another life, a nicer/luckier one, Julia could have been his wife.
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