alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Julia went to the bathroom to apply make-up, trying to get on with the rest of the day, but she felt a strange indifference. The day she found out her husband was cheating on him had changed her. She wondered if this was bound to happen, if she was cursed, doomed to have this life all along. On some level she blamed herself but her desire to get back at him overpowered all other thoughts and emotions racing through her head. For a few months, she pretended she didn't know. All is well darling. What a fantastic act. But dark urges lurked in her subconscious. Could she work up the courage to run over him with her minivan? Was he even worth it? Grab what you like in this house, and get out of this life. Be smart, be powerful. Get even. A thousand conflicting emotions roiled inside her head. Finally, she decided to let it all go and build a new life. Could she get rid of the negative thoughts lurking outside her consciousness?
Julia went to the bathroom to apply make-up, trying to get on with the rest of the day, but she felt a strange indifference. The day she found out her husband was cheating on him had changed her. She wondered if this was bound to happen, if she was cursed, doomed to have this life all along. On some level she blamed herself but her desire to get back at him overpowered all other thoughts and emotions racing through her head. For a few months, she pretended she didn't know. All is well darling. What a fantastic act. But dark urges lurked in her subconscious. Could she work up the courage to run over him with her minivan? Was he even worth it? Grab what you like in this house, and get out of this life. Be smart, be powerful. Get even. A thousand conflicting emotions roiled inside her head. Finally, she decided to let it all go and build a new life. Could she get rid of the negative thoughts lurking outside her consciousness?