alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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He ran up the stairs, breathing so fast he felt his lungs could explode. His heart was the same, hammering in his chest. As he approached her flat's door, a wave of doubt ran up and down his body, his steps became less certain. It's too soon, it's not the right way, she will say no, wait until she is ready. The words swirled around in his head in a chaotic, melting mess. Like most of his life, doubts were clawing at his heart, preventing him from doing something that could make him happy. No, not this time, I will do it. What will be will be. He grabbed the ring's box from his pocket and opened the flat's door to find her naked on the couch with another man.
He ran up the stairs, breathing so fast he felt his lungs could explode. His heart was the same, hammering in his chest. As he approached her flat's door, a wave of doubt ran up and down his body, his steps became less certain. It's too soon, it's not the right way, she will say no, wait until she is ready. The words swirled around in his head in a chaotic, melting mess. Like most of his life, doubts were clawing at his heart, preventing him from doing something that could make him happy. No, not this time, I will do it. What will be will be. He grabbed the ring's box from his pocket and opened the flat's door to find her naked on the couch with another man.