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    alpacinoutd is offline Key Member
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    He doesn't deserve this.

    Is this correct and natural?

    He doesn't deserve this. He doesn't deserve this. Her conscience was whispering to her all night.

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    tedmc is online now VIP Member
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    Re: He doesn't deserve this.

    Quote Originally Posted by alpacinoutd View Post
    Is this correct and natural?

    He doesn't deserve this. He doesn't deserve this. Her conscience was whispering to her all night.
    How are the sentences related? I prefer "conscience was haunting her".
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    alpacinoutd is offline Key Member
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    Re: He doesn't deserve this.

    I want to know if "conscience was whispering to her" works.

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