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    alpacinoutd is offline Key Member
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    The door opened, shedding a corridor of light

    I'm trying to describe a situation like this?

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    How can I?

    The door opened, shedding a corridor of light onto the floor of the dark bedroom. A few seconds later, a stretched shadow appeared in the corridor of light and appeared to be moving closer.


    I know it needs work!

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    Re: The door opened, shedding a corridor of light

    Alpacinoutd, you promised to limit yourself to five new threads per day. This is your seventh. I have closed it along with the sixth. Please do not test our patience. Your threads currently take up over 75% of the first two pages of this sub-section. We already warned you about flooding the forum. This is entirely unfair on our other users.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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